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Whitehart
23 Apr 2007, 04:41 PM
Hi all i hope it's ok to post this here, i would like some comments on our new site design and anything else you would like to see there ?

Thanks for any help

COME ON YOU SPURS

Www.tottenhamhotspurs.tv

Danners9
23 Apr 2007, 05:07 PM
Loads of spelling errors but it seems fine apart from that.

"Totteham Shop" on the left, for example.

You really should credit where the wallpapers came from though, one is from the official site. Can't see them being very happy if they knew.

Whitehart
23 Apr 2007, 05:09 PM
Lol thanks for that the content was rushed together a little at the last min , ill change that now :)

Danners9
23 Apr 2007, 05:11 PM
I've noticed quite a few others too. I'm a spelling, punctuation and grammar nerd and it bugs me.

Differant. Beleive. In the stadium section.

Whitehart
23 Apr 2007, 05:13 PM
cool keep em coming mate, im popping out for 10 mins but will be back to fix them in a bit :)

mattie g
24 Apr 2007, 08:54 AM
I've noticed quite a few others too. I'm a spelling, punctuation and grammar nerd and it bugs me.

Differant. Beleive. In the stadium section.

You and me both.

Whitehart, the site looks pretty good - certainly better than I could do! There are some spelling and punctuation errors I noticed on the main page:

The commas should not have a space before and after them - just a space after. Also, there are a few places where you should have a period instead of a comma; I found that error mainly in the first paragraph. The word "captain" is misspelled ("captin"). Finally, "schoolboy's" should be "schoolboys" - no apostrophe.

Whitehart
24 Apr 2007, 08:57 AM
Thanks Mattie, will be sorted by the end of the day :)

Never was any good at english:)